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----- Original Message -----
From: "C. Jones" <guilty@furinkan.net>
To: <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Thursday, February 07, 2002 18:07
Subject: [FFML] [Ranma][Lemon] newRanma - Final Chapter

It was then that Ranma and Genma heard the first cries of
pain. The girl followed the noises until they found Akane, who was
raising a dust cloud in her fight with the last three of the
attackers. The robbers were screaming to get away, but couldn't get {:

more than} a

few feet away from Akane before they were violently yanked back into
the altercation.

Akane's glare broke, and the corners of her mouth began to
turn up. "You... you had... dreams... about Ryouga?" Her face
contorted as she struggled to keep from laughing.

That's not so bad.  What about Gosunkugi?

"That {was : wasn't} nice," Akane riposted.

"Yes, I was just about to leave for {data : date} with my BOYFRIEND."
She turned and shouted the last word back into the house, as if in
challenge.

That may be a bit much.  Don't byte off more than you can chew. :}b

"I'll admit that I took pretty bad advantage of that," Nabiki
said flatly. "I thought... well, you already know what I thought.
{Forgive : Please forgive} me."

I think she's trying for more humble a this point.  Taiyoko told her she had
to.




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