Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ah!My Goddess] [One Shot] Unspoken Lyrics
From: "DB Sommer" <sommer@3rdm.net>
Date: 2/12/2002, 5:42 PM
To: "Brad" <bn006j@mail.rochester.edu>
CC: <ffml@anifics.com>


Jumping ahead a bit:





            Smiling back I replied, "Good morning, Skuld-chan." As Skuld
plopped down at the table, Keiichi's voice called from the hallway, "Gosh,
it sure smells great Bell."

great, Bell




            "Stop Keiichi-san,

Stop, Keiichi-san




            "You might want to sit down, Kei," said an obviously peeved
Skuld.

Heh. She would be.





            Grumbling slightly she replied, "Do I look alright, Bell?

So they usually shorten her name that way? I don't remember.



            "Sorry, I didn't mean to scare you like that. Keep singing
though, it's such a beautiful song."



            Smiling at him, I nodded slightly and closed my eyes. I
started the song slow and began to let the song grow by adding certain
elements to it. First, I let myself touch the spirit of the temple that we
lived in. Though it was once weakened and on the brink of being cast away to
the seven winds, I managed to coax it back to us. It now housed us within
its walls. It is strong and determined. With the spirit of the temple, I
added a powerful foundation to my song which added strength to my notes.

Nice insight into her thoughts here, BTW.




            "I.I.think I'll go outside. It's such a nice day that it would
be a waste to spend it indoors like Skuld and Urd are doing," Keiichi
finally said.

Heh. Thought so.





            "You don't have to tell me, Keiichi. I already know. I love
you too." I quietly said to myself as I went back to the dishes.

Very nice. Sweet WAFFY little thing that was very enjoyable.

D.B. Sommer





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