Subject: [FFML] Re: Avenging Omake 1: Wrecks N' Effex
From: Brian Randall
Date: 2/22/2002, 6:13 PM
To: ffml@anifics.com
CC: Larry F <lwf58@socal.rr.com>, DB Sommer <sommer@3rdm.net>, Bjorn Christianson <bjorn@mailhost.etho.caltech.edu>


DB Sommer wrote:

<<Hmm. Now of late people have been telling me that the first word after the
ellipse is capitalized. I can't find my bloody English grammar book, so I'm
uncertain. Anyone no for sure which is the official way to spell the word
after the ellipse?>>


Bjorn wrote:

<<To the best of my understanding, it depends on whether (for
lack of better terms) you're trailing a sentence off, or
putting in a pause.

So, for example:

"I shouldn't say this... but I will."

Here, "but" is uncapitalized, because I'm continuing the
same sentence/train of thought.  On the other hand:

"What he said to me...  Enough about that."

This time, "Enough" is capitalized, because the ellipsis
represents an actual interruption.

Bjorn>>

Larry F wrote:

<<It depends on _how_ you are using them. I use ellipses for two main 
effects:


1.)  Trailing off at the end of a sentence--
    "If you gave Mihoshi the keys, then that means..."  In this case, the
next word would be capitalized, because it's a new sentence.

2.)  A pause in speaking rhythm, or a hesitation while searching for the
right word--
    "Kasumi is dancing around in the kitchen, only wearing a negligee?
That's... disturbing."
--or--
    "Finding out about Princess Fatora's... preferences... can be quite
shocking if you don't know her."  Since the word is part of the sentence,
the following one is not capitalized.>>



    As far as I can tell, those are correct, but....

    Everyone forgot to mention that an elipses that terminates a 
sentence should be trailed by a period, which makes the matter a bit 
clearer:

    "This dialogue is just.... I can't finish." vs. "This dialogue is 
just... stilted."

    Find out more than you'll ever need to know about it here: 
http://webster.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/ellipsis.htm

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