Douglas MacDougall wrote:
[snip]

I thought this was a cute little story, even despite my distaste for
"Akane's food monsters."  (I've already suggested how that element
could be toned down a bit.)  It's even more impressive for an hour's
work.

What's wrong with food monsters?

Just because food monsters are purely a fanfic invention doesn't make
"The Varaiyah Cycle," or "8 Days a Week," etc, into bad stories, though.

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print reverse( ",rekcah", " lreP", " rehtona", " tsuJ" )."\n";

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