She hadn't been this bored since giving Mary fellatio lessons...

I know this is going to make me seem like a religious prude, but in all 
honesty, I think you need to change this. It's liable to make most people do 
the mother of all facefaults and may make many put the book down entirely, 
never to pick it up again. As it is, a lot of people are going to be having 
trouble with the image of Mary as a horny, gun-toting demon hunter. This 
could be too much.

But then, theology in fiction has always been a tricky subject.

-Steve "Komodo" T.
Goat and Llama crossbreeding is bad.
Trust me on this.

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