"Michael A Chase" <mchase@ix.netcom.com> wrote:

This guy could take care all Ranma's fiance problems.  As long as Ranma
doesn't hire him.

Heh. Or hired him NOT to fix his problems. :)   Though Ranma generally
has such bad luck that even that would probably backfire on him. :)

I had originally meant to suggest changes from waitress to cook in the
opening paragraphs, but I guess that was just pointing out Tenshi's sharp
grasp of the situation.

Something like that, yeah. Though as Bert pointed it out, it's in part
due to my own ignorance in Americanizing Tenshi's preconceptions, so it
may need to be changed.

Thanks for the comments!


Gary Kleppe
http://www.akane.org/gary/comics.html

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