The man's eyes widened in surprise. "Me?"

| >>
| >Mamoru: You mean I can have a decent power at last?! WAHAHAHAHA!
| >
|
|     Man, everyone comes down hard on this guy. Maybe it would have been
| more merciful to let him die. ;)

   Not everyone, I remember a story, Lines of Destiny by Louis-Philippe
Giroux
that has a fairly powerful Mamoru. Well done at that IMO. I get rather tired
of
him being depicted as a whiny good for nothing idiot. I'll admit he's done
some
stupid things in the source material, but not to the degree that many
portray
him as. </RANT>

   Sorry about that, I'm tired, and I should be commenting on your story,
not
griping about a characterization point.

   I haven't had much time to do any C&C, but I will say that this was a
excellent
piece. Thank you very much for taking the time to share this with us.

--

Druid
druid@bigplanet.com

Where there is love, there is life.

"You don't need a reason to help people."
   Zidane, Final Fantasy IX




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