Regardless, we hope you enjoy this first chapter, which in all honesty, was

so fun to write.

It was quite an enjoyable read. Too bad you're busy and can't finish the
rest soon.

INTERNAL MEMORANDUM
Hell, Department of Acquisitions

Just curious, do you know who the High Demon Lord is? You won't actually
need the answer unless you plan on having HER show up in the fic.

"Well, there is actually a kinda funny story behind that."

Would you like to know the real story behind Keiichi's parents? You might
want to rewrite this section if you knew what his parents were really like.
For example, Keiichi would NEVER refer to his father as 'dad'. He'd get
whacked for it.

"the First Annual Nekomi Tech Nonstandard Motorized Vehicle Invitational!"

That's such an original idea! You, know I just realized that I haven't read
too many AMG fics where racing was the focus.

"No, that wouldn't work." Megumi interjected.  "All the wheels are on

different pivots, so it'd be next to impossible steer it."

I believe it is possible. All the office chairs I know their wheels on
shafts. Adjust the height properly and you can put you legs on them and
steer by shifting your legs. Also, it should be possible to lock some of the
wheels in one orientation.

Motorized roller skates!

Sigel!

Belldandy had insisted that Keiichi put a light jacket on as he left for

classes.

Question, why isn't Bell accompanying Keiichi to class?

What else in the world could I possibly need?

It was about here I went to look back at the chapter title and realised what
the answer was. Nice going!

and besides, poor, reserved little Keiichi would probably pop a fuse if he

were put into that sort of situation.

One would hope that changes eventually...

Her first class started at the same time as Keiichi's mid-day lectures, and

in accordance with some unspoken agreement, the two had begun to meet there
every day for lunch.

Be creative! Belldandy no longer has to be a real college student. She
doesn't need to take classes that Keiichi isn't in!

"Never better," she replied, cheerful as always.

Considering her utter inability to lie, "Very good" should be a more likely
answer.

"Tamiya and Ootaki will sign the Motor Club's university charter over to

me."

Have fun, what will Aoshima has to pay if HE loses instead?

"Urd, I can't feel my link with Blessed Bell!"

Did you have to use THAT name? Another thing, where do you think angels go
when not summoned by their hosts?

One had to take care when speaking to an angel, especially a young one;

How young? Bell has had her angel since her early teens at least.

Although it was possible for a goddess to exist without an angel (and many

did),

Not quite. Once joined, losing the angel can be a debilitating shock to the
host.

you know as well as I do that leaving an angel unattended for a long period

of time is just asking for trouble

Angels exist as extensions of their hosts' souls in a sense. They are never
'unattended'.

A soft, white glow surrounded her, and her long, wavy blonde hair--what he

could see of it, at any rate, flowed weightlessly through the air as if
underwater.

You forgot to mention her wings.

"If you don't mind me asking... what's it like?  Having an angel, I mean."

Say, do you know the story behind Urd and her angel?

I'd love to see where you're going. Goddess in the Mirror ended on a high
note and it will be good to see it continued. I hope you can get the next
chapter out in less than a year!


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