I think what people are missing here (or at least not saying publicly) is 
that - though well-constructed - Thy Outward Role isn't a story. All it is a 
critique on the scenario put forth in Thy Outward Post, using a character 
from Sailor Moon as a mouthpiece to voice Mr. Arromdee's opinion on the 
subject of Ranma-chan deciding to date men. There's nothing wrong with that, 
I guess. It'll attract more attention than a simple statement on RAAF, but I 
got to wonder is there going to be more to it than that? Is this a teaser for 
a story-cycle counter-pointing TOP or is that all there is? 

Respectfully,

Jeremy Harper

Sic pereant omnes inimici tui, Domine

Thus perish all your enemies O Lord





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