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From: "Thryth" <thrythlind@yahoo.com>
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Sent: Wednesday, April 10, 2002 10:04
Subject: [FFML] [OMG/R.5]Marriage Wishes 3

   "Finally got here," Ryouga gasped, limping into the
post office and panting.  Night had fallen, but he
could still get into the public parts where the mail
boxes were kept, and he was certain that THIS time he
had the right post office.  He had even {bothered to :}
read the sign before accosting some random passerby.

   First had been that strange demon that had tried to
"take his energy" or something just before he beat it
to a bloody pulp and walked away.  The youma was
crawling along trying to figure out what had happened
when the Sailor Senshi arrived in a highly confused
state.  They didn't bother to question the situation,
however, and after Sailor Moon had wiped the youma
out, they decided {: to celebrate} the easy, if mysterious, victory
with an ice cream party.

   Through it all he had run across his home once
(unfortunately his parents {returned : had been} on "vacation") and
two of {his : the} other post office boxes that he had
scattered across Tokyo just in case.  It was amazing
how much Shinjuku looked like Kyoto though, or how
much Tomobiki looked like Osaka.  Then yesterday
fighting  Ranma and then those strange guys that were
chasing that woman that...
   Ryouga clamped a hand over his nose as he
remembered the goddess kissing him.  A goddess had
kissed him, {and Ranma, : Ranma, and} Shampoo, but that wasn't
important.  A GODDESS had kissed HIM.  Ryouga pinched
his nose closed a little more and remembered why he
was there.

   Ryouga cinched his eyes closed tightly and tilted
his head down, then slowly cracked his eyes open to
see that SHE had indeed joined Ranma and Herb in the
ranks of the aquatransexuals.  Glancing to her
{reflexion : reflection} in the window, she showed that she had
approximately the same build as Ranma and Herb's
female form, but {quite :} a bit taller and stronger,
maybe.  He still had his fangs, though his hair was
now a deep, forest, green.

If he was quite a bit something, it wouldn't be maybe.

   "One of the usual suspects," {: said : responded} Nabiki.  "I'm sure

you

can deal with it."  Then she was in the restroom and
shutting the door solidly behind her.

   Shampoo sighed as she walked across her camping
{sight : site} and secured the jug in its hiding place.  She
hadn't really found an answer for her {dillemma : dilemma} yet.
Well, she had, she just wasn't certain how it would
turn out.
   She wasn't going to go back home just yet.  No,
first, she'd {saw : see} how this turned out, and then she
would see about home.

   "One of the teachers, Urd-san," Kodachi said
pointedly.  "All the girls are too afraid of me.  As
for why I 'came along' last night, I must say it was
that kiss as I was {putting : giving} you in the taxi."  Kodachi
blushed.  "It felt like I be...it felt {exiquisite : exquisite}."

   "It is coming to a delicate point," one of the two
male demons in the room said.  He too, had {overtime : over time}
dropped his black cat image in favor of the humanity
many greater demons imitated.  "And I'll have you
know, Megaera, that your little charge helped defend
her."

   "I assume that I could marry him within the laws of
Japan to bring him into the deal," Urd said.  "If {: he}
accepts me that is.  Or Ranma could."

   "RANMA!!!!" Akane roared, and suddenly Ranma was
flying via {air : Air} Akane.

   Shampoo had thought of this before but didn't know
what the laws on same sex pairings was when it came to
Jusenkyo.  His Great-Grandmother had provided {his : him} with
a book on the Jusenkyo by-laws, but he had always had
better things to do with his time.

   "My," a voice said dryly.  "This is a rather
interesting development."  Ranma and Shampoo turned to
see Cologne standing there looking at them with a
tired expression.  "You obviously never read the
Jusenkyo by laws Shampoo, or else you were more
{desparate : desperate} than I thought."

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