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From: "Thryth" <thrythlind@yahoo.com>
To: "FFML mailing list" <ffml@anifics.com>; "Ranma Fiction List"
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Sent: Thursday, April 11, 2002 11:07
Subject: [FFML] [OMG/R.5]Marriage Wishes 4

   "Ranma Saotome," Urd said and saw Mara wince.
"Ryouga {Saotome : Hibiki}, Ukyou Kuonji, Akane Tendo, and
Shampoo daughter of Silk."  With each name Mara winced
again.

   She walked into the building and noticed that there
were some backpacks in the hallway next {: to where} she set hers.

   She tip-toed {in : into} the room, trying to guess where her
parents might be.  Being caught in an unfamiliar body
by her parents was not a good idea.  They tended to
fight first and ask questions much later, quite
unreasonable in her opinion, really.

   "It's not working {dad : Dad}," Ryouga said in a tiny voice
{and : while} getting ready to run.

   "We'll get to that after a moment," Aki said
dismissively.  "Ryouga Hibiki, I'd like to introduce
you to one of your fiancees."  She indicated the
mini-Goddess that had been {there : their} guest the past couple
of days.  Ryouga turned around slowly and looked at
the doll curiously.

   "Honey, {its : it's} a manga," Jiro said.  "He's NOT real,
not like we are." ~I'M supposed to be the berserker,
sheesh.~

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