Subject: [FFML] Re: Ryoko Saotome: Those who forget the past...
From: Benjamin Goldberg
Date: 4/21/2002, 11:21 PM
To: Thryth
CC: Steffan <sscrivener@earthlink.net>, FFML mailing list <ffml@anifics.com>


Thryth wrote:
[snip]
((Note: this would be about two years after the
epilogue of Ryoko Saotome.  The flashback parts range
from about eight to ten years after episode 18.))

Two years, and she's already a detective?

Ooops...need to change that...this is still a side
story and not really a part of the "The New Saotomes"
series, but it leads into it....and I still have Ayeka
and Ran-Ran's side stories to do...but anyway...that
should be FIVE years....and from what I can
tell...detective is the lowest rank they got...Mihoshi
is a detective really

Hmm.  I don't think that detective is the lowest rank in *most* police
systems.  Perhaps the GP is strange :)

Depending on what continuity you've based your story on, Mihoshi is
either:

A) A complete ditz whose lack of competence indicate that she must
surely have gotten into the GP on the strength of her looks or due to
nepotism or somesuch, or 

B) A complete ditz whose great memory, great observation skills, and
great luck *just barely* make up for her clumsyness and airheadedness to
produce someone who's simultaneously a competent police officer (good
enough to get into GP on her own) and walking disaster area.

I prefer the latter kind of Mihoshi, since it makes her a much more
interesting character -- and if that's the version you're using, then
she's surely competent enough to be a few levels above the lowest rank
in the GP... which in turn indicates that Detective (her rank) is not
the lowest.

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