Hmm.... What to say....

<pulls out some fans and starts waving them>

WAI! Lurker is writing again!  WAI!

...yeah, that should about do it.

<sweatdrop>

Hmm, this is suspicious.  I've started working writing again.  There
must be a Negaverse plot involved....

<sweatdrop again>

Okay, no more SM fanfics for me.

Anyway, good start, Lurker.  It's similar to some things I've seen
before, but its a good twist, and frankly, a damn sight better than most
of what I've seen out there.  I'm looking forward to more, if for no
other reason than to enjoy more of your writing.

A little nit...sometimes the flow on the Ranma-crew inserts, seems a
bit...forced.  Did you have trouble with those parts?

--
Christopher Angel
c_j_angel@hotmail.com
-Does this mean I have to go by "God-Boy" again?

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