Michael A Chase wrote:
Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Fri, 26 Apr 2002 00:50:27 -0700 Brian Randall <brian@azurite.org> wrote:
She reverted from adult to child because it was too painful, why not from a
goddess as well
That was always my thought on the subject....
Her hand dropped to her side, as the reaver's claws fell, no longer
attached to the reaver itself. The compulsion lessened, but she could
not back away. Ranma's voice reached her, even though her eyes remained
firmly trained on portal before her. "So this is what it's all about,"
he mused quietly. "This is what everything that was done to this world
was done for. Tokimi wants you, Washuu."
Very early someone said that the reavers were designed to give Washuu
trouble. I'd originally thought it was because they were resistant to the
type of technology she wielded, but apparently they were aimed specifically
at her. They've appeared on other planets, was she there before they
arrived? If so, why didn't the greatest scientific genius in the universe
notice the correlation?
Ranma made the first comment that they seemed like they were designed to
give her trouble, when Washuu admitted that she didn't know who made
them, and was afraid it was her, and that she had just forgotten.
And she'd never been on the same planet as one before....
Galaxy Police craft that was in convoy with him. Detective Kuramitsu was
something of a legend, though Yohito had only actually spoken with her
cadet, so he was confident that any difficulties could be easily managed.
I guess no one has told him what kind of legend.
Exactly.
Amidst a large circle of her warriors -- though diminished from the
morning meeting -- Cologne surveyed them, frowning unhappily. "Welcome
to Jusenkyou," she said tiredly. "Don't drink the water. How are we all
holding up?"
At least she still hase her sense of humor. Don't touch it either.
Heh. Of course. ;)
Washuu shook her head. "That couldn't be it -- the one in my lab came
just as close to me." "And there were who-knows how many layers of your
laboratory stacked on top of itself there to confuse it."
This needs a paragraph break.
Dang. One of them still got through. For some reason, Word ate all the
formatting on this chapter.
Woot! Thanks, again, for all of the C&C! ;P
If I didn't respond, it's because I used your suggestion.
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