On Sun, 28 Apr 2002 13:38:14 -0700 Brian Randall <brian@azurite.org> wrote:

Michael A Chase wrote:

Suggested changes: {before : after}
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On Fri, 26 Apr 2002 11:35:59 -0700 Brian Randall <brian@azurite.org>

wrote:

Or even not as an outtake, although it's probably too late to have this=

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happen before Ran-oh-ki transforms and no longer (I'm presuming) needs=

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to eat metal.  Of course, he could like it as much as the other two=20
cabbits like carrots, and continue to do so anyway.

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Maybe he'd like a small snack.

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  Like Mihoshi's ship. I imagine Kintaro would protect the toilet. =AC_=

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I imagine he's learned his lesson and won't unplug the computer to save
power.

That was an inspired match up.  I look forward to the results of his
investigation.

Eimi offering to sing to Terry is a reference to HAL from 2001: A Space=

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Odyssey.

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I saw that and wondered why she ddn't sing Bicycle Built for Two.  Havi=

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the song fade away as a reaver gets to her core would have been a real =

tear jerker.

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Ack! It could have been, but I'm not sure how to work that in... now. I=

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think it's for the best that I leave that scene as it is, for the time.=

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Terry is one of the actual unlucky few who didn't manage to live through=

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this whole mess. :/

I know how it goes.  It seems like my best ideas generally come to me
immediately after the email is sent.

Terry is one of the unlucky many who didn't make it.  He just happens to be
one the few of those who we got to know.  I don't think you've been
specific, but I've figured the death toll to be much worse than Second
Impact.  The population of Terra Two is probably less that a billion, maybe
only a few tens of millions.  The only thing that saved the story from
being extremely dark is that you didn't dwell on it.

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Mac :})
Give a hobbit a fish and he eats fish for a day.
Give a hobbit a ring and he eats fish for an age.



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