Suggested changes: {before : after}
On 30 Apr 2002 11:36:11 -0500 Colleen Morgan <minty@clockworkgirl.com> wrote:
She was shaking. Or he was. Or both of them were. He still avoided her
eyes. He wasn't really sure what brought them to this place - on the
uncomfortable tile floor, clothes in {disgarded : discarded} piles, slightly damp,
still breathing heavily.
It was a twighlight time, somwhere in the haze after Jusenkyo. He went
through the motions, defeating martial artists, avoiding accidental
marriage proporals, training...and watching Akane. As always, he
enjoyed that the most. Her hand coming up to push a lock of hair
behind her ear, her outline in her window at night, her smile. Her
smile.
Perhaps you meant Jusendo instead of Jusenkyo.