There ya go; a tiny lick of Shampoo-bashing (well, whether 
yours had it or not, I figured *I*d better make it obvious 
here), liberal use of semi-colons, and a title that doesn't 
quite make sense - at least not at first blush.  Hope you're 
not offended, Nick, and maybe a little amused; that's all I ask.

If this is intended to suggest that Nick's title didn't make
sense at first blush, then I have to disagree completely.

My first reaction, on reading the title "No Dominion", was:
"Oh, no, somebody's going to die, or already dead."

After a moment's reflection, I realized that, given the ENTIRE
line from which Nick's title is taken, "Death shall have no
dominion", that was not necessarily a cause for concern.

and, upon reading the story, the title seemed quite apropos.

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