----- Original Message -----
From: "ling shen" <lifebounce@yahoo.com>
To: <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Monday, May 27, 2002 2:29 PM
Subject: [FFML] [R1/2][Draft]Catharsis: Tragedy (a)


ling-chan! You're back! Wai!

I refuse to give any overall comments on this story until you post the
epilogue to Fragments to the ffml and finish Becoming Danna. ; p

However, since I luv your stuff, I can't resist saying a few things about
Catharsis. Here we go:

    Suu: And _what's_ wrong with that name? I happen to think a little
Kaolla would lighten Ranma, Michi and Kasuaki's lives right up! (If you
don't get the reference, go watch Love Hina! Go on, I'll wait.)

    Kazuaki: This man needs to be dumped. He's a schmuck. A
basically-harmless schmuck, but a schmuck nonetheless. (Can you tell I like
the word schmuck?) Unless a horrible miscarriage or the like happens, she'll
have to deal with the guy for the rest of her life at any rate- at least let
her deke out on marrying the poor boob.

    Get Ranma and Kodachi back together, _pleeze_! Give the poor boy a happy
ending for once! Failing that, let him hook up with Michi beyond a
Mulder/Scully pseudocoupling. I can't restate it enough, cut the poor boy a
break!

    Remember, I'll probably love the story anyway no matter how miserable
everyone ends up in the end, so feel free to disregard any and all of the
suggestions above as you please.

Looking forward to more from you soon, and good luck with your soap hunk.
~_^ (Maybe you can write him a screenplay?)

Dave Menard


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