On Sun, 26 May 2002 19:28:59 -0700 Brian Randall <brian@azurite.org>
wrote:
Notes: Divergences should become apparent as relevant.
"Three-oh-four is on the top floor, next to, er, that is, next to
Aoyama, and {four : two-oh-four} is on the lower floor next to Maehara," he
explained, struggling with the temptation to stare at the woman's
chest. His eyes, nearly of their own accord, seemed to creep lower
and lower, widening slowly, until he forcibly snapped them upward,
blinking sharply and shaking his head to clear the thickness that
had begun to settle there.
"That went well," Ranma decided. "She was pretty reasonable." Shaking
his head, he took a step towards the exit -- he needed to find out
why a girl was in the bath at a non-coed dorm, and he had a sneaking
suspicion that the answer would not be to his liking.
I could smell that coming, even without having seen Love Hina.
Shaking his head, and sparing no time to admire the undressed women,
he grabbed at the last bits of wreckage, sweeping them aside.
"Suu-chan," he gasped while working, "move that beam upward, please.
Narusegawa, Mitsune, if you can, get Ranma-san and Motoko-chan out."
Wouldn't that be Oe-san at this point? The have only just met and aren't
familiar with each other yet.
The young man retreated, babbling a swift apology, and Mitsune
reentered, glancing at Keitaro as he dashed away. "So, um, she's in
room {four : two-oh-four}. She didn't have a futon, but I found a bedroll and set
that out," she offered.
"Weight and size are two different things," Haruka grumbled, walking
into room {four : two-oh-four}, and allowing Oe to slip to the floor slowly. Rolling
the redhead onto the bedroll, Haruka glanced at the heap of
disarrayed clothing scattered about the room. "You know, when you go
through someone else's things, you generally want to put it back
where you found it," she noted.
Ranma frowned, shaking her head. "It's the voice," she assessed.
"Everyone tells me I sound like someone else they know."
Does that mean Megumi Hashibara is Haruka's voice actress?
(later) Yes. I just looked it up. Seeky.
The Refuge told me I couldn't write comedy, and they were right. But
from the wreckage, some form of dramatic comedy may be salvaged.
This chapter dedicated to Ginrai, who made me do it.
This has a lot of potential. I look forward to seeing more.