Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Fri, 31 May 2002 20:09:33 -0400 Sam Vilsmeier <syp104@email.psu.edu>
wrote:
Ranma's faced twisted into an absolutely diseased expression. There are some
things children wish there parents to leave them in the dark about. In a
weary, sickened voice he replied, "Ok... I'll see you later {mom : Mom}."
With a big stupid grin he said, "Hello, Nodoka-chan!" He then {peed : peered} in the
door and stopped in surprise. He did not expect to the boy in girl form, and
the boy's rival waiting for him. He had a bad feeling about this.
I doubt Nodoka would think in manly for him to pee in the door.
"Hello, {husband : Husband}," said Nodoka. Genma gulped, as he looked at the silk
wrapped bundle she was holding. She had her katana. Every ounce of his being
was fighting the urge to run. There was something very wrong here.
"But {husband : Husband}, I must insist."
She was obviously unhappy with the decision, but shook her head. "While I do
not agree with this choice, he is still head of this {house hold : household}. I am his
wife and must support his decision. I'm sorry, Ranma."
Nodoka closed her mouth and sat down, a small smile on her face. "Good bye,
my son. {Far well : Farewell}, Ryouga-kun."
"I love you too, {mom : Mom}."
Apparently, the kami did not like Ryouga's comment, and it began to rain.
Ryouga mentally screamed as he once again lost his humanity to his
thrice-damned curse. He really needed to learn to curb his {Hubris : hubris}.
Hotaru rolled her eyes, she knew Setsuna-mama didn't say cruel things like
Haruka, or dig through the hamper looking for evidence like Michiru-mama,
but she should have shown enough consideration to not get drunk! "What is
it, Setsuna-mama?"
Setsuna leered forward, and smiled stupidly at Hotaru. "What's the name of
the daddy?"
And where are those sandals?
Ranma sighed, "I told my parents about what happened, you know, between us,
and my idiot old man kicked me out of the house. I really don't want to
impose or nothin', but anyway, could I crash here for a while?"
At least that will make it easier for Haruka to find him. She may not be
please though. Setsuna will probably be annoyed at having a chaos factory
in the next room.