----- Original Message -----
From: "Michael A Chase" <mchase@ix.netcom.com>
To: "Thermopyle" <Thermopyle@tds.net>; "FFML" <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Wednesday, June 12, 2002 9:59 PM
Subject: [FFML] [C&C][Xover][Ranma][Key: The Metal Idol] Key to the Heart
prologue

Suggested changes: {before : after}

On Fri, 7 Jun 2002 21:36:02 -0500 Thermopyle <Thermopyle@tds.net> wrote:

Ignoring him, Ranma {bound : bounded} forward to attack.  Genma took up a

defensive

stance, swearing to himself that he was never going to teach the fool
boy another technique again.

Fixed.

More would be interesting.

Sending!





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