Subject: [FFML] Re: [fanfic][ranma]Divided I Stand: Part III
From: Jim Miller
Date: 6/19/2002, 4:36 PM
To: Donald Lee Granberry <noharness@mac.com>, "ffml@anifics.com" <ffml@anifics.com>


--On 6/19/02 7:20 AM -0500 Donald Lee Granberry wrote:

       "True, but most of them think you, or Kasumi one, no a
little folk medicine, and Nabiki has been feeding children as
fast as she can cook rice."

I don't understand the first half of this sentence.

      "Ah, the swimming pool," the man said, giving Ranko a
grin. "Good thinking. Sure you're gonna be able to carry two
full buckets of water?"

Yuck.  Is chlorinated pool water safe even after boiling?  I know when
there was major flooding here in Iowa back in 1993 bringing in trucks of
drinking water was one of the first things they did.  An out door pool is
going to be just as contaminated as a ditch after flooding.

       Ranma turned to say something to Tofu, but the lanky
doctor had already gone to look at patient.

...at a patient.

      "Gun down!" Tanaka bellowed, as his training took
control. Sight picture, squeeze. The M16A2 rifle barked. For
reasons that Tanaka did not understand, the tinkling of
ejected brass always bothered him more than the muzzle blast.

Yep, that's a cliff hanger alright. :-)

Jim

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