One minor, itsy-bitsy, teenie weenie little prob with the fic...

Since Kachiko, in her ripe old age of seventeen, hasn't yet married the 'old pervert', then why was she referred to by past friends and acquaintances as 'Miss Tendou' For some reason she has the same maiden name as her future husband?

To make this a longer c&c... I loved the entirety of the demon panda thing, as well as the very nasty bathroom scene. ^_^

Seems Kachiko already had quite an interesting life even before she fell 
into the world of her daughters and alleged-future-son-in-law. It's also a good thing Gos's father met his own 'Ifurita,' or else he wouldn't have been born.

Can't wait for more. Would offer a more in-depth c&c, but college life and an encyclopedia-size marketing book makes me fail to do so.


Ja!
Abdiel

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