Abdiel wrote:

One minor, itsy-bitsy, teenie weenie little prob with the fic...

Since Kachiko, in her ripe old age of seventeen, hasn't yet married the

'old pervert', then why was she referred to by past friends and
acquaintances as 'Miss Tendou' For some reason she has the same maiden name
as her future husband?

As was mentioned by Lurker, customs differ there and this was such a
situaiton. You can thank Rob Barba on pointing this cultural facet to me a
while back, which made doing this a lot easier.

To make this a longer c&c... I loved the entirety of the demon panda

thing, as well as the very nasty bathroom scene. ^_^

Thanks. Glad it worked for you. I was having problems coming up with how to
reveal the curse to Kachi when that came to me.

Seems Kachiko already had quite an interesting life even before she fell
into the world of her daughters and alleged-future-son-in-law.

Yes, though she wouldn't see it so much that way.

It's also a good thing Gos's father met his own 'Ifurita,' or else he

wouldn't have been born.

Well, obviously he was born, so something had to happen. :)

Can't wait for more. Would offer a more in-depth c&c, but college life and

an encyclopedia-size marketing book makes me fail to do so.

No prob. Thanks for what you sent. I appreciate it.

D.B. Sommer

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