Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Wed, 03 Jul 2002 01:15:39 -0700 Sean Danna <carrotglace@mindspring.com>
wrote:
Ono Tofu frowned deeply as he watched the pair face off. The
boy who had interfered was dealt with rather harshly.
I thought Ono was his family name.
"Yes, I'm afraid it is. If you're quite finished, you can go
now. You've got training to see {too : to} after all."
Tofu frowned as he watched the battle. He did go over and
check on Kuno, but the boy was as healthy as he could be
considering what had happened {too : to} him. He'd have little more than
The disks fell to the ground {lamely : limply} as their power source was
cut off.
"I see," said the {Doctor : doctor} finally.
Nabiki narrowed her eyes at Ranma and kept silent. The boy
was much more dangerous than she had imagined. Something on this
level was not something she was sure she could handle. That
scared {here : her} a lot.
TBC...
Threats, always threats. :}b
BTW, how is Gaijin coming?