Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Mon, 29 Jul 2002 17:00:28 -0500 "C. Jones" <guilty@furinkan.net> wrote:
When Ami broke down and cried, it was not because she was
being expelled, as her teachers and her mother thought. It was
because she had failed that voice... that person... for a second
time.
I guess an incident like that would explain why Ami changed schools to
Juuban in the middle of the term.
The meeting between Mercury and Miyama was a nice chance for
reconcilliation. That seems to be a recurring theme. I guess that's why
this is semi-dark instead of dark.
Recognizing the youma for what she was, Sailor Mercury
grabbed her by the arm. "The delicatessen is that way," she pointed.
"Your friends are probably still there."
A Senshi giving a youma directions to escape. That was a bit
disconcerting. It does make sense though.
Finally, unable to take it any longer, tears began to roll
down Cobalt's face. She wiped her nose on the sleeve of her {jacket : shirt}
and put her face in her hands. "You sit here in the sun and light,
with peace and justice and plenty of food to eat, and you never
considered those who you doomed to slow starvation."
Her jacket is all bloody from being used it to try to slow Achorite's
bleeding.
If you couldn't tell, I'm playing pretty fast and loose with the
Sailor Moon backstory, taking elements from both the Manga and the
Anime where it suits me, mostly for the sake of fleshing out the
horror that the Dark Kingdom has become out of the horror that it
was when Beryl and the Generals were alive. Some of the backstory
elements I've manufactured whole cloth for the sake of the story.
I hope they're not too distracting.
It's like Humpty Dumpty said, you have to make sure they know who's the
boss. Anything not specifically mentioned in the canon is fair game as far
as I'm concerned. People also develop over ten years.