At 05:33 PM 7/29/2002 -0700, Michael A Chase wrote:

Suggested changes: {before : after}

On Mon, 29 Jul 2002 15:30:01 -0500 "C. Jones" <guilty@furinkan.net> wrote:

        Ytterbium nodded. "You should try. It might make you feel
sick, but it shouldn't hurt you.

Another hint about how harsh this world is.  It's okay if it makes you sick
as long as it doesn't hurt you (badly).

Yeah, the Dark Kingdom is really messed up at this point. We'll spend a 
little more time there later.

stomach. After the initial nausea had passed, Cobalt discovered that
the only ill effect from her experience was that she wanted more and
more.

Chinese McDonalds? :})

I'd call that an ill effect. ^_^

        The three puppeteers who manned the 'Rabbit Room' set
sighed, realizing that once again, they were going to be responsible
for carrying the show. Usagi and Minako ran off stage as fast they
could.

So this isn't the first emergency in ten years.

Hehehe... Look at their contracts, later on.

        "I don't know," Ami admitted. "It's just... well... look at
this," she said, holding the Mercury computer out to the {five : four} 

other

women.

Unless Pluto is watching too.

D'oh! Jones can't count!

        "Well, that would be you, since I never heard of your club
before today. What's you're name, {miss : Miss}? Something-ite, wasn't it?"

And what is your address in the Dark Kingdom?

A good indication of how unprepared Cobalt and Achorite were to deal with 
the realities of trying to 'attack' Tokyo.

        Her eyes flicked back and forth between the two women in
panic. "Urr... I think I need to talk to the manager to get your
cards set up. I'll be right back."

At least she's showing some smarts.  These aren't your Queen Beryl's youma.

Hehehe. More on that in Chapter 3.

        "Waah!" the towel youma bawled. "I don't wanna be punished."

        "Run!" Achorite said, leaping in front of her.

        "That's not right," Sailor Mars noted curiously.

Somebody's off their queues.

Poor Rei. No clue at all how to behave when the youma aren't trying to kill 
her.

Thanks for the C&C, Michael.

C.


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