On Sat, 19 Oct 2002 11:50:07 -0500 Donald Lee Granberry <noharness@mac.com> wrote:
Suggested changes {before : after}
On Fri, 18 Oct 2002 22:29:46 -0500 Donald Lee Granberry <noharness@mac.com>
wrote:
Soun Tendo, who had frozen himself into solid immobility {at : in} mid-step
when the apparition ballooned into existence, looked around and found
himself standing alone in the yard on one foot. Kumon and Hibiki had simply
vanished. Thirty seconds or so later, Soun's mind slipped back into gear.
I'm gonna argue about this one. I like "at".
You may ignore my suggestions (with dignity) if you prefer. I generally
try to follow the author's intent when I can figure it out and have not
problems at all when my advice isn't used.