Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Wed, 23 Oct 2002 01:49:39 -0700 Carrot Glace
<Carrotglace@mindspring.com> wrote:
The others were in danger; she knew it. They were fighting valiantly,
but it just wasn't working out for them. There was that evil boy, the
{Youma : youma}, and the people trying to kill the boy. Plus there was the advent
of newer, stronger, and more powerful {Youma : youma}. The Goblin creature that
Spiderman managed to beat was a prime example of this. It was far too
deadly for the inexperienced young girls to handle. They needed her, and
now she had the ultimate failure to deal with. Even after she had
healed, the power did not return.
People trying to kill the boy? Like the senshi? <G>
She's also no more experienced than they are. Perhaps less so.
Carrot backed against the door with his hands held up. "No! Don't say
that!" He felt something hard press against his belly and {her : he} froze. "Oh
god. I'm gonna die." He looked down and saw the shining silver surface
of the revolver that was jammed into his gut.
He can never get an even break, can he? At least this will sharpen up his
communication skills, if he survives.
"Do you mind? I'm talking to my boyfriend," said Michiru as she narrowed
her eyes at them. They vanished in an instant.
She may need to work on her interpersonal skills too.
"Excellent," replied Beryl. "Those buffoons are dealing with that
monster you set loose in Tokyo still. All while our operations in Kyoto
go undetected."
So much for Haruka getting a break.
"He grows stronger with each encounter," replied Kunzite calmly. "It is
difficult to create a {Youma : youma} that can handle him."
"Oh. I get it now," said Haruka as she turned to look at her date for a
moment. She was jumping up and down excitedly. "This isn't so bad."
That was when the chorus of the song started. The girls started to sing
along, most of them badly.
She ought to know better by now than to say something like that. She's
lucky Zoicite showed up.
"I'm gonna go take a closer look," said Haruka as she jumped out of her
seat and moved into the {isle : aisle}. She started down the stairs with a frown
on her face. "I know that voice from somewhere."
In a spectacular flash of light she spun into the air as her clothes
{fades : faded} away, only to be replaced by the white of her senshi uniform. The
skirt formed around her waist along with the gloves, boots, and jewelry.
She finished her transformation and glared down at the stadium. "I don't
think so."
"An Outer Senshi?" he muttered as he took a step back. He looked very
alarmed. "What is {he : she} doing here?"
If she lost all her clothes during the transformation, he probably can tell
she isn't a he.
"She must be destroyed," agreed Zoicite. "She is far {to : too} dangerous to be
left running loose."