About the stuck together sentences, I think I should make something clear,
and save everyone the effort of helping me edit them.
Naturally I spellcheck and edit before sending these out, but when I paste
mystories from word to hotmail, then send, these simple errors keep coming
in. It's obviously some sort of formating problem, but I'm an English
major,not a software expert. I keep trying new ways of putting these out,
but hotmail seems determined to foil me.
I appreciate the effort you must have gone through to find all of those
stucktogether sentences and point them out... however the effort is entirely
wasted! My copy of this has not one of those errors, so it does me little
tono good to know where they showed up after posting. Thank you, but in the
future try to edit out other types of mistakes, as the only solution for
thatparticular one is a formating change of some sort. >>you?" She bowed her
head. "I'm sorry, I'm not myself right now. I should go >>home, get some
sleep. You'll keep me informed of any news?" >>It is interesting that she
recognizes what he is doing and realizes that she's been in his position
before herself.
Dr. Mizuno is portrayed in the Manga as an exceptionally cool mother, and I
try to keep in her character, as little as canon shows us. >>"Well, then
whatare you waiting for, Inspector? Give him a call!" With a >>swift
movement, she handed the detective her desk phone. >
I like her attitude.
Like I said, she's cool. (Or at least that's the slang phrase I saw used
forher in my translation of the manga.). >She just switched from calling
him'detective' to 'inspector'. This seems >reasonable since she just
switchedfrom receiving the news the he brought >to requesting (or demanding)
action from him. >
I'm not familiar with Mouri Kogorou. Is he from another anime?
>From Detective Conan! You can thank my editor, web page master, and brother
(all one and the same of course) for the addition of Detective Conan to this
storyline. The idea to use Conan for the detective Dr. Mizuno hires was
his,and most of the Conan scenes were written by him. >>Kogorou puzzled
overthe file for a few moments, muttering to himself. "It >>says here that
the panther was... shipped to San Francisco? For a chance >>test... what
doesthis mean?" >
What is a chance test?
Er... my brother will have to answer this one. It sounded very technical
when I read it, so I desided that he must have known what he was talking
about and left it in. So, Pat, what IS a chance test? >>Nodoka glared at
Mara in anger. "I'll have you know my family has always >>{agedvery : aged
very} well, thank you."
Gives "Careful what you wish for" a whole extra bite.
I noticed in the OMG manga that Mara did tend to use people's wishes when
doing her more powerful spells, like turning Manami into a car, or making
thewhole school worship... er... what's her name, the girl that is so
jealousof Belldandy.... >>"Damn." Mara glanced back at her lower half, only
to watch it topple over a >>moment later, her legs and lower body falling
over to the side, even as >>{GenmaSaotome : Genma Saotome} landed lightly
behind her. "Damn!" Mara levered herself up with one arm slowly, and
pointedher other hand, palm first, at the rotund {martialartist : martial
artist}. "Now... you've really pissed me off." With an explosion of black
energy Genma flew backwards into the far wall, cracking it, then >>slumped
tothe ground, head lolling to one side. >
"Do you have any idea how much that tickles?"
Heh... that would be a good line. Not really in character... but funny.
Mara does tend to be a little to serious about things to make a joke like
that... but Urd might say something along those lines. >>Nabiki was still
stalling on the stairs. "Do you have any ID, Mr. >>{Detective?"She :
Detective?" She} said with a hint of irony in her voice. >
I suppose Ranma would blow something up, but that wouldn't work for Misty.
Gotta hide, gotta hide... I know! Moko Tabakishi!!! Wait... that's not
hiding. >>"These wings really are a bother." Kasumi frowned to herself,
turning away >>from the roof's edge and folding her wings over her shoulders
with a shrug. >>It still amazed her at how much control she had over her new
appendages, but >>despite how powerful and flexible they were, there was one
thing that made >>them extremely inconvenient. "If I keep getting splashed
like this I'll run >>out of clothes in days." She sighed. "It was bad enough
when I just turned >>into a cat, but at least then I didn't ruin whatever I
was wearing when I >>{gotsplashed : got splashed}." >
She probably ought to invest in some backless one-piece swimsuits.
If I recall correctly, she does have one or two of those... of course,
wearing a swimsuit when not on the beach would seem a bit improper to our
good Kasumi... although not as improper than going topless. >>Akane waved
her off, shaking her head. "I'm fine. I'm feeling better >>already{,see :}?"
Akane made a muscle with her right arm and smiled. "Good as >>new, see?" >
Crossfeed from Minako?
Hmm... what do you think?
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