----- Original Message -----
From: "The Eternal Lost Lurker" <lurkerdrome@sbcglobal.net>
To: "FFML" <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Thursday, November 07, 2002 8:17 PM
Subject: [FFML] [fanfic][Azumanga] Aftermanga Daioh 1 - 1

So far I think you're doing a wonderful job. I like your style, and you've
captured the comedy of the original series. However, I am one of those who
feel that your Japanese is gratuitous. I think it could be removed without
harm to the story. However, that's your call, and if you think it's
necessary to the story then I'll deal. :)

Kevin Callahan

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