Subject: [FFML] [C&C][fanfic][UY/Ranma/SisPri] "Lonely Souls" Part 7 "A" Side "Empty Chairs" (rewrite/new material)
From: Michael A Chase
Date: 11/16/2002, 6:47 PM
To: Fanfiction Mailing List <ffml@anifics.com>, Frederick Herriot <fherriot@yahoo.com>


Suggested changes: {before : after}

On Wed, 13 Nov 2002 04:17:50 -0500 (EST) Frederick Herriot
<fherriot@yahoo.com> wrote:

     Oogi frowns as he gazes on the "Rose Emperor's" image.  The 
bodiless {present : president} of Phentax Two currently stands in one of the 
cloaked bioroid factory ship's primary control centres.  As soon as 
the Ellsian patrol monitor had come into orbit over Earth -- moving
to a geosynchronous position directly over the Holy Citadel itself!
-- Oogi had ordered the factory to skirt northward, putting its 
centre of axis over Urawa.

     "Agreed," Chikage relaxes.  "I didn't understand all the 
implications of this myself until much later, but from what I did 
{knew : know} at the time, I realized that the sooner Ane-kun was given the 
chance to establish a new sense of family, the better.  That's why,
after we learned Tampopo-san had taken Ane-kun under her wing, I 
persuaded my sisters to start addressing her as 'elder sister.'
To do that, I had to tell them what Jusenkyou had done to Ane-kun,
plus what was temporarily halting that from happening."

     "Alright, alright, then!!" the now-acting principal of Furinkan
High claps his hands as he walks through the crowd to stand beside
Nabiki.  "Now that particular matter's been resolved, I think we can
bring an end to this demonstration," he indicates the still-dazed
Kunou with a finger.  "And to ensure that {: none of} this sort of unnecessary
nonsense happens again, I believe that permanently removing Kunou-kun
from his position as captain of the kendo team seems prudent.  
Wouldn't you agree with me, Takuichi-kun?"

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