Subject: [FFML] [C&C][FFML][SM/Ranma][Repost]All my Outer Prologue
From: Michael A Chase
Date: 12/28/2002, 5:37 PM
To: Sam Vilsmeier <syp104@email.psu.edu>, "FFML (E-mail)" <ffml@anifics.com>, Sam Vilsmeier <syp104@psu.edu>


Suggested changes: {before : after}

On Sat, 28 Dec 2002 15:36:18 -0500 Sam Vilsmeier <syp104@email.psu.edu>
wrote:

Oh shit, oh shit, oh shit! He was the filling of a girl sandwich. No ifs,
{and : ands,} or buts about it: Akane was going to *kill* him, slowly and painfully...
and if she didn't, Shampoo and Ukyo would finish the job.

Plenty of butts though.  Of course, that's a large part of the problem.

There was a loud yawn from the girl on his chest as she re-entered the land
of the living. She groaned slightly as she opened her eyes. After a moment
she looked up, and {strait : straight} into Ranma's eyes.

Ranma chucked to himself as he once again considered the situation. He was
in bed with four women. One of them was awake, and cuddling his chest,
another just fell off the bed and was obviously pissed, and two more were
still sleeping in his arms. Considering his past luck with women he could
only come to one realization.

Technically he's now in bed with three women since Setsuna fell out.
Aparently he doesn't have to understand Old Norse to get the general idea.

Setsuna {curse : cursed} loudly as she hit the ground. Today her chosen language was
Old Norse, and the reason was its colorful collection of insults and foul
words. The Norse really knew how to express their opinion when things were
not going their way.

Considering how she's feeling she's probably cursing quietly
though with feeling.

She had too many secrets, and could not allow herself to become attached to
a 'mortal'. She had watched everything she ever known and loved be destroyed
once, and she would be damned before she watched a husband slowly rot away
from old age while she stayed young. It was just not good for {ones : one's : her} mental
health.

She shook her head then slowly wobbled to her feet, and took a look on the
bed. Michiru, Haruka, and even Hotaru?! She blinked twice then exclaimed,
"What the hell?!"

It would have been really interesting if Ranma had been hit with cold water
sometime during the night.

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