On Thu, 26 Dec 2002 04:37:28 +0000
David Johnston <rgorman@telusplanet.net> wrote:
First of all, all comments are IMHO.
Project Pandora
Nice writing, and I got somewhat curious to see what happens next. Also,
it's very nice to see an original BGC story! It's a good respite from
all that Ranma and Sailor Moon, and a show I like more than those two.
However, I suspect this "new foreign group" is coming across as a bunch
of "annoying new characters". The story seems to take place after the
original OVAs and by that point the Knight Sabers are true pros (if they
weren't already when it all started). It seems these people got the jump
on them too easily, both when stealing the secrets of the hardsuits and
when "neutralising" Nene. If they have enough resources to steal
hardsuit plans from the Sabers, something even GENOM and the USSD couldn't
do, they probably could have come up with them themselves. Also, Nene by
now should be quick enough that she could at least send out a warning
when she noticed something was wrong. Sending her alone was also bad
tactical thinking on the part of Sylia (practically an heresy :)) - if
she cannot fight, she should have some backup.