Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C][fanfic][Ranma]Cinders Chapter 9
From: "KaraOhki" <karaohki@snet.net>
Date: 1/25/2003, 11:34 PM
To: "Michael A Chase" <mchase@ix.netcom.com>, <ffml@anifics.com>


Thanks, Michael



"And now for today's weather.  The skies will be clear {today :}, and
the
residents of Tokyo should see plenty of sun--"

I'm not too sure of that...I don't think the "today" is necessary here.



She dressed quickly, ran downstairs, and ate breakfast with a speed
that
would have impressed her brother-in-law.  Then she was gone.

If I recall correctly, she is still trying to keep the marriage a
secret and the attempt to register it might still fail if it reaches
the wrong hands.  I have been eagerly waiting for a long time to see
what happens to it.

Thank you!  What did you think of Nabiki's solution?



"Yeah, it usually is."  Ranma turned right and started walking down
the
hallway, Akane at his side.  They encountered no one but members of
the
staff already familiar to both of them, who smiled and greeted them as
they passed {by :}.  Then an IV pole appeared in one of the doorways,
followed
by an elderly man who was slowly pushing it ahead of him as he walked
towards them.  Akane shrank close to Ranma's side, and clutched his
hand.

I don't quite get what you mean.  Are you saying "by" isn't necessary?



"Excuse me?"  Nabiki looked over her father's shoulder, and turned
white.
The envelope was from City Hall, and it was addressed to Mr. and Mrs.
Ranma Saotome.  This was going to require some very fast talking on
her
part.

At least she's getting a chance for a save.

And it's a good thing that Soun is easy to confuse.

Thanks again,
June



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