Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma/Goldenboy/Love Huina] Diamonds in the Rough: Chapter 6 --Visitors! Hoax! Madness!
From: Brian Welch
Date: 2/13/2003, 4:44 PM
To: FFML


--- Brian Randall <brian@azurite.org> wrote:

	The two hopped down from the roof, landing before the other
assembled 
students, though they were crowded around Shinobu, who had her back

turned to them. "Are we ready to start?" she asked. Shinobu turned 
around, surprised, and Ranma saw what the other girl carried in her

arms. "We'll jus-- AUGH!"

	"You're one to talk," Motoko grumbled, as Ranma trembled,
wide-eyed, in fear of the mewling kitten.

Hadn't thought about this before, but if Kanako ever shows up in this

fic, Ranma's reaction to Kuro the flying cat should be interesting.
 
	"New experiment! How does a Ranma react to cats!" she exclaimed.
"Must test!"

	"Um... no, that would be a bad idea," Ranma insisted, shaking her
head. "A really bad one. Anyway, on with today's lesson."

Yeah, the LH crew has enough trouble dealing with Mecha Tamas. ^_^;

	He sat up, eyes bleary, and glanced around. "Together?" he
managed. "Yes! Together! Allegiance or death! Bigfire!"

	Naru rolled her eyes. "This isn't an anime, Oe-san. I think you've
had too much to drink," she criticized.

Oy. ^_^;

	"His synch rating is over four hundred percent!" Suu exclaimed,
waving 
a small hand-held computer in one hand, a white lab coat fitting
loosely 
about her shoulders as she dashed into the room. "He's gone
berserk!"

Double oy. Suspected this was coming, just not this fast. ^_^

	The van came to a lurching halt, flipping end over end while the
music 
seemed to shift by the Doppler effect, and the ground greeted the
metal 
behemoth. When Keitaro opened the door to stagger out, he and Seta 
bleeding from matching cuts on their heads, he had to wonder if the
ride 
was as bad as he had thought. Was it, perhaps, just his
imagination? The 
van certainly didn't look like it had rolled the way he remembered 
happening.

Seta's infamous indestructible van. 

	"Tell me about it," Keitaro said after a moment. "Seta's driving
scares me."

Give him a few years, and he'll have Seta's technique down pat --
unfortunately.

Not a bad chapter.

Brian Welch


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