Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Fri, 11 Apr 2003 00:50:32 EDT JLee100441@aol.com wrote:
Story {Statis : Status}:
Mrs. Brisby and the {Mystrey : Mystery} Rat: Halfway done.
"Please, follow {me." Said : me," said} the short haired girl, opening the gate. As the
trio entered the compound they ran into another girl. The girl was slightly
older than Nabiki and had long brown hair. Ranma noticed that she had a calm
aura about her.
"Hi, Kasumi, this is Ranma Diggers and his girlfriend Monique Pincer.
They're the new exchange students at school. Guys{: ,} this is my sister Kasumi."
"{Right." Growled : Right," growled} Akane, crossing her fingers behind her back. Nabiki then
decided that it might help to keep her pig-tailed guest away from her sister.
"Come on, we'll talk in the living room while we wait on dinner. Why
don't you get cleaned up Akane" That said the middle Tendo sister{, :} entered
the house.
"{Oh." Said : Oh," said} the older man, as he visibly deflated and walked back to his
spot at the table.
"Jeez Akane, you've got to be so melodramatic about everything. It's just
a little {sparing : sparring} match." Said Nabiki, while looking at Ranma pleadingly.
"Fine, {sparing : sparring} then." It wouldn't be her fault if it got a little rough.
"Shun-Leep {style." Answered : style," answered} Ranma.
{Jeez, why doesn't she just announce her moves with a loudspeaker?}
{Thought : thought} Ranma. "Your speed and tactics need work."
"You were {saying. : saying?} As my mom would say 'You've got a lot to learn
junior.'" Akane growled and charged forward.
"You bastard!" {Yelled : yelled} Akane, as she burst back in and charged at Ranma
blindly. A second later she was sent flying back towards the koi pond.