Uhn.  As an opening it fails to grab me.  Where's the conflict?  
Presumably it should develop in the next chapter...at least one hopes
so, but to grab the reader at the very start you should probably give a 
sample of the badness.  As it stands, this reads like one of those 
pointless crossovers where nothing happens.



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