Subject: [FFML] [ranma]Shampoo's Chance 10
From: "Caleb" <caleb_david@angelfire.com>
Date: 6/30/2003, 1:01 AM
To: ffml@anifics.com
Reply-to:
caleb_david@angelfire.com






____________________________________________________________
Get 25MB of email storage with Lycos Mail Plus!
Sign up today -- http://www.mail.lycos.com/brandPage.shtml?pageId=plus 

-- Attached file included as plaintext by Ecartis --
-- File: Shamp10.txt

Ranma � and it�s characters are the creation and property of Rumiko 
Takahashi-sama and various other entities, none of whom happen to be 
me.  I�m simply using them without permission, but I promise to put 
them all back when I�m done, except possibly for Shampoo;)   
My other works can be found at http://www.angelfire.com/anime5/ficaleb
Feedback may be sent to caleb_david@angelfire.com
Support quality fanfic; subscribe to http://www.faniac.com 


Shampoo�s Chance:  Spirit of the Law
By:  Kaleb

Chapter 10
Who�s ya Sensei Showdown


        �SHAMPOO BATTLE DRESS, MAKEUP!�

        �What the hel��  Ranma�s charge suddenly came to a halt as 
Shampoo twirled around and tossed her waitress outfit up into the air, 
leaving her completely naked and her now unconfined breasts free to 
follow those movements.  Blushing, Ranma looked away, �Quit screwin� 
around and put some clo��

        �Ranma, look out!� warned Akane.

        Diving for cover, then rolling to his feet, Ranma barely 
avoided Shampoo�s lunge attack.  Both combatants whirled around to face 
each other, Shampoo now dressed in her clans� full battle regalia; 
complete with bracers, battle bra, and bonbori, or rather, one of her 
bonbori.  Shampoo looked at it, appearing confused, while Ranma eyed 
her warily, determined not to miss her next move.  �Now where I leave 
other one?� wondered Shampoo aloud.   Suddenly seeming to remember, 
Shampoo snapped her  fingers, �Oh yeah,� *KA-KLONCK*  �Was in waitress 
dress,� declared Shampoo smugly as her second bonbori dropped atop 
Ranma�s head, dropping him to the ground.  Clutching her bonbori in 
both hands for more power, Shampoo lunged like lightning again, 
prepared to pulverize Ranma where he lay.  �HIYAA!�

        [I can�t lose this quickly again!] thought Ranma desperately 
through his hazy head.  Ignoring the ringing in his ears, Ranma grabbed 
Shampoo�s other bonbori.  �Thanks for the weapon!� shouted Ranma as he 
returned it to its owner with a full force throw, forcing an early 
swing on her part to deflect it.  Now that she couldn�t counter, Ranma 
sprung forward on his hands, catching Shampoo in a scissor lock, which 
he quickly reversed into a scissor suplex, slamming her to the ground 
hard enough to send her body bouncing.  �You overcommitted your final 
strike Shampoo,� scolded Ranma over his shoulder as he followed through 
on his momentum, flipping back to his feet.  

        �How�?� groaned Shampoo from where she lay, holding her head 
with one hand and propping herself up on the other elbow.  To Ranma�s 
dismay she quickly got back on her feet, appearing only slightly dazed.  
>From her dropped bonbori and the dents in her bracers, it appeared 
she�d been quick enough to curl her head and cover with her arms, 
taking the brunt of the suplex�s force on her forearms.  �Can�t believe 
Ranma recover so quick.�

        �I could say the same about you,� complemented Ranma as he 
pressed his current advantage, unleashing a barrage of strikes at 
Shampoo before she could fully recovered.  �I also can�t believe how 
stupid that cheap opening of yours was; Shampoo Battle Dress, Makeup!� 
mocked Ranma in falsetto.  

        �I thought it was quite stylish,� commented Nabiki from the 
sidelines, �and an ingenious technique.  Throw a guy off guard by 
twirling around naked, then take him out while he�s distracted.�

        �If Akane hadn�t interfered Ranma would no still be standing,� 
said Shampoo as she gave ground, concentrating on blocking Ranma�s 
attacks while she waited for her head to completely clear.  [That�s no 
empty boast] worried Ranma.  [I know she can win with one clean shot, 
but if I don�t let her� Whoa!  Barely avoided that counter.  Damn!  
She�s really good.  And fast.  Can�t let my guard down for a second].

        �What are you doing here?� Akane asked as she turned to her 
sister.

        �It�s not a proper fight without a Greek chorus,� explained 
Nabiki.  �And you can�t very well be a chorus by  yourself, now can 
you?�

        �What the hell are you talking about?!�

        �Anyway, this looks like it�s going to be good.  Shampoo�s 
starting to put Ranma on the defensive and make him give ground.  Looks 
like he may have met his match,� said Nabiki slyly, watching Akane out 
of the corner of her eye.

        �Don�t underestimate Ranma,� huffed Akane defensively.  �Even 
when outmatched, he�s surprisingly resourceful.  If there�s a way to 
win, he�ll find it, and if there isn�t, he�ll keep fighting till he 
makes one up.  Besides, I think he�s just trying to avoid getting in 
real close with Shampoo; she could slip in one of her debilitating 
pressure point attacks real easy then.  He�s just giving ground to keep 
her at arms length.�

        �Your faith in your fiance is commendable.  What say we put it 
to the test?  How much you willing to wager Ranma wins this?� 

        �W-what?  � I�m not going to bet with you Nabiki!  You always 
cheat and screw me over somehow!�   

        �My, _someone�s_ bitter about _always_ being got the best of,� 
laughed Nabiki.  Then speaking loudly while watching the combatants out 
of the corner of her eye, �I guess that shows who you think is really 
going to win.  Poor Ranma, his fiance doesn�t even believe in him 
enough to place a harmless little wager.�

        [Akane?]  Ranma�s train of thought was abruptly derailed as 
Shampoo smacked him in the torso and upside the head with a double 
roundhouse.  Stumbling back, her narrowly evaded her finishing hook 
kick and follow through sidekick.  Regaining his focus, he still 
couldn�t help but glance over at the girls on the sideline one more 
time.  

        Akane embarrassedly looked away.  �Guess I can�t blame you 
after seeing how sloppy Ranma just was,� said Nabiki.  �At this rate 
Shampoo will have him in no time.�
	
        �Shut up Nabiki.  Who knows what you learned from that day with 
Shampoo that your keeping to yourself.�

        �Well, I  did learn something,� admitted Nabiki, �but nothing 
that�ll give me an edge here, and not for lack of trying.  Still, 
_I�ve_ got enough faith to bet on Shampoo, even though I honestly don�t 
know how this�ll turn out.  I�d forgotten how exciting it could be to 
have things uncertain.  Your missing one of your best chances Akane; 
it�s rare for me to go on instinct instead of insider information.�

        �Fine, I�ve got 500 on Ranma,� said Akane determinedly, despite 
never having won a bet against Nabiki, or perhaps because of it.  

        �500?  _That�s_ the extent of your faith?  Please Akane, lets 
make this worth our time.  I�ve got 5000 on me which I�m willing to put 
on Shampoo.�

        �5000?!  I thought you were near broke a couple days ago.  
Where�d you get� never mind.  I don�t want to know.  I�ll bet 2000 that 
Ranma wins, you can take it or leave it.�

        �Deal,� said Nabiki with a smile as she and Akane shook on it.  
�All right!  Go get him Shampoo!  If you win this we�ll celebrate with 
some drinks from my winnings!  Of course I�ll expect you to make up for 
skipping out on the tip last time!�

        �Would give that rest already?!  Still, drink really hit spot 
after get done here,� said Shampoo as she casually wiped the sweat from 
her brow with one hand and blocked Ranma�s punches with the other.  It 
irritated Ranma, but Shampoo didn�t feel quite as confident as she was 
acting.  Against opponents who she didn�t take down immediately, she 
usually was able to pick up on patterns in their fighting style by now.  
Everyone had attacks and defenses that they unconsciously favored, and 
once she detected them, she could very quickly end a match.  But Ranma 
seemed to be stringing his moves together completely randomly, yet not 
haphazardly, it was too damn effective for that.  There seemed to be an 
almost poetic method underlying the madness, but for the life of her 
Shampoo couldn�t read or anticipate it.  

        That wasn�t keeping her from launching her own offense though, 
as evidenced by her turning her sweat wiping into a knife hand counter.  
Shampoo was sure she had him, but at the last moment he ducked, not 
enough to evade the blow, but a knife hand was designed to either break 
the neck or rupture the carotid artery; at this level her hand merely 
bounced off his head.  [Ow!  Thick skulled idiot!  How I keep missing ?  
Had several strikes already should connected cleanly!  Like he dodging 
by sheer force of will to no lose, where his power come from?  Got to 
get guard down somehow.]  Turning toward the girls on the sideline, 
Shampoo asked sweetly, �Where Akane going to treat her knight to date 
if he win her winnings?�

        �W-what, that wasn�t part of the bet!� exclaimed a blushing 
Akane.  �T-the jerk would probably lose rather than have to date me.�

        �Eyes front you cocky bastard.  Let�s see you block all these!  
TENSHIN AMAGURIKEN!�  Ranma unleashed the first technique taught him by 
the Amazons; a burst of speedy movement capable of unleashing hundreds 
of punches instantaneously.  They were far to fast for the girls to 
follow, but before they were finished Shampoo was knocked off her feet 
and then sent flying across the yard.  �Hah!  How�d you like that!  You 
fly a lot further than Ryo� *gasp*�  Ranma�s taunts were cut short as 
he went down on one knee and clutched the bottom of his ribcage.   

        �Both of them?  Good thing I had you bet on Ranma winning.  
Even if it�s a draw, I win,� said Nabiki.  

        �Would you shut up about that!  I think Ranma�s choking!� said 
Akane as she rushed toward Ranma�s side.   �Shampoo must have traded 
with him and struck his diaphragm.  If she paralyzed it he won�t be 
able to breathe!  God, I hope that idiot didn�t knock her out.  She 
might be the only one who can release it in time!�  Realizing the 
situation was serious, Nabiki ran over to check on Shampoo.  �Ranma!  
Are you okay?  Can you breathe?!  Say something!� implored a panicked 
Akane.

        �And *gasp* how the hell *gasp* � would I do that if I was 
*gasp* choking,� said an annoyed Ranma through labored breathing.  
Fortunately he was too short on breath to add an insult questioning his 
fiance�s intelligence, or he really would have been finished.  

        �Oh right, you�d need air to�  Then you are alright!� said 
Akane thankfully.  

        �Of course I am�� said Ranma as he pushed Akane away.  �I was 
able to twist enough� to throw her aim off� it�s just cramping a 
little�  Now get out of the way!� snarled Ranma, ��I�ve got a fight to 
finish�� 

        �Damn, Shampoo thought finished you there,� spat the amazon as 
she rose too her feet, looking a little worse for wear.  �Still, only 
matter of time before Ranma falling,� declared the amazon as she wasted 
no time charging back in at him.  �Was waiting for Ranma use that 
technique,� taunted Shampoo as she and Ranma rejoined their hand to 
hand melee.  �When focus on such excessive punching, leave small but 
perfect opening for Shampoo.�

        �Yeah, too bad you blew it.  I�d say you got the worse of that 
exchange,� boasted Ranma as he regained his  breath.  �Sure it hurts a 
bit to breathe in, but that�s nothing I can�t ignore now that the 
cramping has stopped.  Face it, your fancy little pressure point 
attacks are worthless as long as I keep in motion.  Your good, 
extremely good in fact� for a girl; but you can�t beat me without the 
weapons, cheap shots, and tricks you amazons use to compensate for 
being weaker than men.�

        �Really?  Chauvinist pig boy just keep trying convince self 
that as long as able.  Martial art lot more than raw strength; not how 
hard or how much, but _how_ hit that matter,� lectured Shampoo as she 
slipped a hook past Ranma�s guard.  �And I knowing how do more damage!� 
twisting her knuckles, Shampoo shredded Ranma�s inner cheek against his 
own incisors.  

        �You�d been better off rechambering that attack quickly,� 
countered Ranma as he grabbed her wrist, �than risking an opening just 
to add that spiteful injury!�  Using the momentum he already had from 
the amazon�s blow, Ranma yanked Shampoo off her feet, over his head, 
and slammed her straight on her back.  Expecting a follow up throat 
strike, Shampoo wildly lashed out with a pressure point counter, but 
Ranma knew better to stay in close with the amazon.  Withdrawing into a 
crane stance, he then launched an ax kick, dropping it straight at 
Shampoo�s raised head.  �TAAAH!�

        Flattening her head against the ground and catching Ranma�s 
heel in her palm, Shampoo was able to bring it to a stop right before 
it impacted her face.  Bringing her other hand up, she shoved back, 
throwing Ranma off his feet.  [Shit, that too close!] thought Shampoo 
as she scrambled back onto hers.   [Can�t believe let sexist fools 
trash talk make Shampoo so careless!  That supposed be my game!]  
Panting, the two tired warriors turned back toward each other.  Without 
giving either of them time to catch their breath, Shampoo resumed her 
assault.  �Might think have advantage as man,� warned Shampoo, �but if 
Ranma no start taking seriously and stop pulling attacks, won�t stand 
chance!�

        �Huh?  I�m not��

        �Don�t jerk Shampoo round!  I felt!  With ax kick, and Tenshin 
Amaguriken, was slight, but didn�t put full force behind,� suddenly 
bringing her arms back to help brace her stomach, Shampoo let Ranma�s 
sucker punch connect.  �See?!� accused the amazon as she locked her 
indignant eyes on Ranma  �You holding back!�  Her angry counter punch 
knocked a surprised Ranma for a loop.

        [She�s right!] realized Ranma as he got back on his feet.  [It 
was almost imperceptibly slight, but I did pull that punch at the last 
moment.  But why?  I wasn�t trying too�yikes!]

        �You find I hard enough knock out as is; so stop playing and 
give Shampoo real fight!�

        �You tell him Shampoo!  Kick his ass!�  cheered Nabiki, feeling 
that things were finally turning around.

        �You idiot!  I thought you weren�t going to be holding back!� 
yelled a distraught Akane.  �You make me almost hope Shampoo kicks that 
chauvinistic ass of yours!�

        �Damn it!  Could I please get a different cheerleader?� Ranma 
complained while weaving his way around Shampoo�s ferocious attacks 
while trying to figure out what in the world was wrong with his.   

        �I don�t think he can help it Akane; as long as I�ve known him, 
hitting girls hasn�t been Ranma�s style,� Nabiki explained.  �I�ve 
heard that male wolves are hardwired to be incapable of hurting the 
females.  Ranma has pretty entrenched ideas about what is and isn�t 
proper conduct for a man.  Striking women may be distasteful enough to 
him that he�s subconsciously shrinking from it.  You can�t expect him 
to immediately discard something so ingrained that it�s become an 
instinct.� 

        �Oh Ranma� you� y-you dummy!�

        �Which means he�s in big trouble,� concluded Nabiki.  �Given 
Shampoo seems to be real tough and that Ranma�s attacks aren�t at full 
strength, I don�t think he can score a KO.�  

        �Hey, if Shampoo had been just a bit slower reacting, both the 
suplex and the ax kick would have been lights out for her,� pointed out 
Akane.

        �_If_ she�d been slower, but she wasn�t.  She�s incredibly 
fast, and with a strong defense to top it off.  I don�t think Ranma�s 
used to dealing with an opponent who doesn�t give him the speed 
advantage.�

        �We could say the same for Shampoo.  They�ve both got an 
amazing amount of agility.  I can hardly follow their exchanges; they 
seem about equal speed wise.�

        �For now,� admitted Nabiki.  �But I think I see Shampoo�s 
strategy.  The longer this battle goes on, the more likely Ranma is to 
lose.� 

        �Wha�?�  Akane�s question was interrupted by Ranma�s body 
crashing between the two girls.

        �What wrong Ranma?� Shampoo asked sweetly as she lowered her 
foot.  �*tsk*  You bit too slow there.  Is the mighty man getting 
tired?� suggested the amazon as she advanced on her panting rival.  
  
        �She�s wearing him out!� realized Akane.  

        �Uh huh,� Nabiki said.  �Intense hand to hand combat can be 
even more exhausting than all out sprinting.  They�ve been going at it 
for a while now, and Shampoo�s been making sure Ranma doesn�t get any 
breathers.

        �But shouldn�t Shampoo be slowing down too?� asked Akane.

        �Not yet.  Her everyday training gives her a definite edge over 
Ranma here.� 

        �Daily training?�   

        �The deliveries�!� realized Ranma as he desperately gave 
ground, trying keep his distance from the relentless amazon.  But he 
was rapidly running out of space to back up into.  

        �You mean all her biking for the Cat Cafe customers�?� Akane 
said in disbelief.  

        �Yup,� confirmed Nabiki.  �Customer satisfaction is the most 
important factor in the restaurant business.  Happy customers become 
repeat customers.  It�s imperative to get their food to them as quickly 
as possible.  Considering Shampoo�s skill on her bike, the Cat Cafe 
must have quite the reputation for delivery.�

        �True, true,� chimed in Shampoo as she stepped inside Ranma�s 
punch and sent him flying into the wall with a sidekick.  �Our speedy 
deliveries so popular.  Is insane.  At peak time Shampoo so busy 
zooming back and forth.  Is much exhausting.  But try to stay fast as 
possible, get bigger tips then.�

        �Everyday Shampoo pushes her lungs endurance to the max trying 
to get her customers their dinner piping hot.  What a work ethic!  No 
wonder she�s out lasting Ranma.  Doesn�t help that he�s got an injured 
diaphragm either.  Shampoo probably had this planned from the start,� 
said Nabiki with obvious admiration.   

        �And Ranma only helped speed things up with his Tenshin 
Amaguriken!� groaned Akane.  �Throwing all those punches so quickly is 
taxing.  He completely wore himself out that time he kept using them to 
beat Ryoga�s bakentetsu endurance.�  

        �Still think got best of exchange?� taunted the Amazon as she 
leisurely advanced on her cornered prey, licking her lips and flexing 
her fingers for effect.  [Like a cat�s claws] Ranma couldn�t help but 
think as he shivered with dread.  There was no mercy in her eyes, only 
a gleeful sadism.  First she�d paralyze, then play with him.  Ranma�s 
instincts were screaming at him to run, and only the knowledge that 
she�d pounce if he so much as began to bolt allowed him to hold his 
ground.  [Get a hold of yourself Ranma!] thought the Saotome youth as 
he tried to fight down the irrational terror taking hold of him and 
keeping him from thinking straight.  [Don�t let her unnerve you!  
Think!  There�s gotta be a way to turn this around�!]  

        �Pathetic,� said Shampoo with amused disgust as Ranma clutched 
his trembling and hyperventilating body.  �Must realize useless to try 
resist.  Perhaps hope I get bored and finish off sooner?  Coward Mouse 
boy not man at all,� Shampoo said sadly as she prepared her final 
pressure point attack.  

        She never got to deliver it though.  Only her noticing Ranma�s 
pupils suddenly dilate and her awareness of his ki field drastically 
shifting allowed her to put up her defenses in time.  Not that they did 
her much good.  With a blood curdling �MEOOWWRR� Ranma pounced at the 
amazon.  Shampoo backed out of the range of his claw swipes, but not 
far enough to avoid the powerful ki aura that surrounded the Neko-ken; 
a ki aura to which bracers and flesh were hardly impediments.  Shampoo 
screamed in pain as Ranma converted her forearms into bleeding scratch 
posts.  Concentrating on maintaining the ki field around her muscles 
was the only thing that kept them from being torn to pieces.  Trying to 
ignore the burning pain in her arms, Shampoo swatted Neko-Ranma away 
with a double backhand, buying herself a moments respite.  �I-
impossible,� shuddered the amazon, �Wasn�t pushing Ranma far enough to 
make snap��  

        �No, unless he deliberately decided to push himself over,� 
realized Akane.  

        �You  mean he did it on purpose?� Nabiki gasped.  �I didn�t 
think he could do that.  His phobia�s so intense that he always avoids 
it.  Even when he wanted to use it against Cologne, you had to shove 
Shampoo in his face to force his change.�

        �Right, but this time he didn�t run.  Instead he faced his 
terror and embraced it, confronting those traumatic memories that 
Shampoo was trying to use against him,� explained Akane.  �Ha!  And you 
thought he was a coward Shampoo!  Who�s getting weak kneed now, neh?!�  

        �Uh Akane, maybe you should try and calm Ranma down and we call 
this a match.  If I recall, Ranma can�t control himself in this form, 
and he looks like he wants to kill Shampoo right now.  If his moral 
restraints aren�t in place�� said Nabiki, only partially motivated by 
the prospect of losing her bet.

        �No!  Shampoo still can win!� protested the amazon as she 
steeled herself.  Now that she was facing Neko-Ranma, Shampoo finally 
understood why Cologne had thrown in the towel; if she made the 
slightest mistake she might very well meet a gruesome death at her 
former beloved�s claws.  �Ranma make mistake; Neko-ken pure animal 
offense.  Shampoo can always find opening in attack like that [I 
hoping], and one opening all I needing [I really hoping].�  The amazon 
also didn�t mention the collateral damage she�d have to take.  But it 
was unavoidable.  Due to its inhuman speed and surrounding ki aura, the 
Neko-ken was virtually impossible to dodge.  And the penetrating power 
of those ki claws made the technique unblockable to boot, as attested 
by Shampoo�s shredded bracers.  The Neko-ken was a truly horrifying 
offense.  Still, as long as she could survive it�  Projecting a cat 
like aura (easy considering she was intimately familiar with being one) 
toward the hissing Ranma, Shampoo intended to set off his territorial 
instincts and make him attack in a rage�


End of Chapter 10
Why?  Because I�m evil.  Bwhahahahaha!  And as any fan of Shonnen 
knows, a good fight is more than an episode long.  This won�t turn into 
Dragon Ball Z though; I promise to wrap the duel up next chapter.  
Will Shampoo get horribly mauled?  And just who is gonna win anyway?  
You�ll have to tune in next time to find out.  Don�t miss it!
Chapter 11
Who�s ya Sensei Showdown:  Sudden Death Overtime
Shampoo:  Why I no liking next chapter title?
Author:  It�s a figure of speech.
Shampoo:  Sure, like you never playing with double or more meanings.
Author:  Uh� no comment.
Shampoo:  Let Shampoo see that script! *snatch*  AIYAH!
Author:  Um� it�s not quite done yet� [maybe I should just shut up and 
sneak out of here before she gets to _that_ part]   


             .---Anime/Manga Fanfiction Mailing List----.
             | Administrators - ffml-admins@anifics.com |
             | Unsubscribing - ffml-request@anifics.com |
             |     Put 'unsubscribe' in the subject     |
             `---- http://ffml.anifics.com/faq.txt -----'