Well... Ok. 'Some news of some note.'

First, I'd like to express my thanks to all those who extended to me
their comments and criticism. With it, I hope to make my writing more
appealing to as willing an audience as possible, as well as improve my
overall writing style. I have just recently finished the update of the
first fifteen chapters in response to this input. Many of the changes
were minor - grammatical errors corrected, spelling mistakes, other
little problems (a couple miss-spelled okonomiyaki's, the infamous
'prima donna' mistake, etc).

Of broader importance were additions and corrections to the effect of
(hopefully) lessening the 'Ranma-demonization' of which several made
reference to. Also, I have added two new scenes... a small one at the
end of chapter 12, and a larger one in the middle of chapter 9. Lastly,
I remodeled, expanded and improved on the comparison chart formerly in
chapter 6 and moved it to chapter 14. So far, I have made this
comprehensive update of Book One (the first fifteen chapters, and the
cumulative .doc file) to those sources available on my website.


"Learning Curve" Book One (version 1.4)

http://www.wpi.edu/~jbw


Corrections to my fanfiction.net account will have to wait.
The site seems to be down...


Again, "Learning Curve" is constantly under work, and I am always
receptive to comments/criticism, be it positive or negative. So, as
always, any response is greatly appreciated!
(Oh, and Michael A. Chase, I did get your C&C in time to make numerous
corrections. Just barely, though. Your email came just in time.)


J. Wagner
jbw@wpi.edu





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