<DIV>Having just read Rakhal's C&C I'm reminded of
a few more points.</DIV>
<DIV> </DIV>
<DIV>I too thought the scene with Nodoka was very
powerful. I would have liked to have seen it, rather
than be told about it second hand, but it still was
very vivid.</DIV>
<DIV> </DIV>
<DIV>I agree with Rakhal completely on the use of
pronouns. </DIV>
<DIV> </DIV>
<DIV>Finally, when I first read the end I thought it
seemed a little off too, but then I figured Ranma was
looking to tell somebody, that it was something he
rather had to do. Anyway I was thinking maybe if you
wrote that last scene from RANMA'S perspective, it
would clear up the initial doubt. Besides nothing has
been in his perspect yet in this chapter and really
his perspective is the one I'm most interested in as a
reader. And it would clear up the pronoun problem
nicely at least for that part.</DIV>
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