Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Wed, 27 Aug 2003 03:34:11 -0400 "PsyckoSama (Sam Phoenix)"
<syp104@email.psu.edu> wrote:
The boy {: replied,} "I'm Saotome Ranma of the Anything Goes School of Martial Arts. If
ya wanna fight me, let's take this outside."
As Usagi stood inactive trying process the conflicting input and come to a
conclusion, Minako decided to step up to the plate. With a growl she said,
"I saw you walk into that {Love Hotel : love hotel} with Hotaru-chan, you evil seducer of
innocent young women! Your crimes will not go unpunished! As the Senshi of
Love, I will PUNISH YOU."
"U-SA-GI!" Ikuko screamed in rage, her lungs somehow providing enough force
to {rattled : rattle} the very foundations of the house.
Having fully caught her breath, Ikuko continued. "Minako's one of those
underdressed vigilantes too I see, and from the sound of it so is poor
Hotaru-chan! What about your other friends, huh? Ami, Makoto, Rei? What
exactly are you girls? You dress like some {perverts : pervert's} wet dream ruining around
in those silly in those silly Lolita-Con schoolgirl outfits all day long,
are you just devil hunters or are you something more extreme; like some kind
of sick religious cult bent on world domination or something? Are you
recruiting? {{Can I join?}} What other poor girls have you drawn into your madness, how
about poor, innocent Chibi-Usa? It looks like you conned poor Hotaru in,
what about her? Where does the madness end Usagi?! Answer me, damn it...
ANSWER ME!"
Tomoe Hotaru was not having the best of weeks. In fact, in the last three to
four days her mood had gone up and down more often then a pair of kangaroos
in the mating season. She didn't know if was her pregnancy hormones starting
to kick in or the kind of crap that happened for the sole reason of making
people's {live : lives} that much more difficult, but it was really starting to get on
her nerves.
Earlier in the day Hotaru and her "beloved" had decided to do some soul
searching followed by the kinds of wild and wacky adult activities that
couples like to do in love hotels. What really made this "memorable" was the
presence of her father figure at the door, a little bit of fun made possible
by one "Aino Minako", a girl who was standing less than five meters from
Hotaru.
Hmm. I don't remember them using the merry-go-round or the trapeze.
With a thunderclap, Hotaru punched Minako in the face. The {Blond Senshi : blond senshi} flew
backwards against the wall and bounced off, leaving a Venus shaped
indentation.
Minako reeled at the harshness of the assault. Hotaru knew that the self
appointed "Senshi of Love" was very sensitive about her inability to find a
boyfriend. It gave her a very easy target, and memories of the insults she
to which {: she} was oft victim to gave her one hell of an arsenal.
Ikuko shook her head and {waived : waved} goodbye to her 'niece'.
"{Good by : Goodbye}, Ranma-kun."
In response the woman scowled slightly. "Goodbye, {Minako : Aino}-san"
Both of the younger girls glared at the {blond : blonde}.
Hotaru sighed and glared at Minako. "I'll tell you what is going on, but {don
't : don't} just go around telling everyone," Hotaru snapped.