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From: ffml-bounce@anifics.com [mailto:ffml-bounce@anifics.com] On

Behalf

Of Christopher Angel
Sent: Thursday, August 28, 2003 2:16 AM
To: PsyckoSama (Sam Phoenix); ffml@anifics.com
Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma/Sailor Moon][Xover][Drf#2]Awkward

Consequences

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With the kind of stride usually reserved for death row inmates

walking

the

green mile, Usagi walked over to the table and sat down, seemingly

defeated.

I think "Green Mile" is should be capitalized.

Wasn't the "Green" part prison-specific? It's been a while since I saw
that movie, but ISTR that it was what the locals called their own
"Mile".


 

Nothing else stood out to me.

I'm really enjoying this series.  It's easily one of your better ones.

I would, however, suggest that you take some time and look up the true

lot

of teenage pregnancies in Japan.  From what I recall, Hotaru is

actually

understating what sort of social pressures she's going to be under.

...Which means that Nodoka is *really* a nutcase, going on about
grandchildren all the time. How much of that is Fanon, BTW? I missed the
greater part of the Manga that dealt with her...

Also, remember the "Christmas Cake" thing?


SP



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