Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C][SM][Revised] Shades of Gray - Chapter 11: Collision Course
From: The Wanderer
Date: 11/4/2003, 8:17 PM
To: FFML


Michael A Chase wrote:

Suggested changes: {before : after}

On Mon, 27 Oct 2003 19:08:00 -0600 Aaron Nowack <anowack@tulane.edu>
wrote:

Nyxan bowed a second time. "You are too kind to your servants,
Great One. Tell us your desire, and we will {fulfil : fulfill}
it."

As before, both spellings are valid.

And Metallia told her {worshippers : worshipers} what was required
of them.

Both spellings are apparently valid, but I am so unfamiliar with the
latter that I wasn't sure without having to check first; on that basis
if no other, I would recommend the original form.

"You know what to do! Secure the area, then drain the humans. For
Metallia!" At the name of their goddess, the youma let out a roar
and hurried to {fulfil : fulfill} their assigned tasks. Orinas's
smile widened as he watched his followers expertly scour the area
for the humans, smashing open the glass doors of the stores that
lined the busy road. The road would not be busy for long, as two of
Orinas's youma were turning some of the strange metal and glass
contraptions that traveled along it sideways to block it. The
screams of those humans inside the selected vehicles were
particularly delicious.

See the first response above.

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