Subject: [FFML] Re: [Original][lime][The Darkstarr Chronicles] Chapter One: Jessie
From: Bira
Date: 1/31/2004, 8:50 AM
To: ffml@anifics.com



On Thu, 29 Jan 2004 20:13:36 -0500
"LSMcGill" <lsmcgill@hotmail.com> wrote:

The thing I noticed first about this story is that you managed to create
two textbook examples of a "mythical" RPG stereotype: the Female
Character Played by a Male Player, also known as the Busty Bi-sexual
Ninja Babe.

I got the point about the relaxed moral standards, but the clothing
these two characters wore (especially Arika) was too little to be
practical. As Mr. Johnston pointed out, much of it can actually be a
hindrance. There's several hygiene-related reasons not to run around
basically buck-naked, never mind morals. Unless being built or
engineered not to need clothes is awfully common in this setting, that
cyborg death-machine is going to stand out an awful lot, and if that's
the case she might as well be built to look like a Battlemech.


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