<Coming out of the lurking shadows>
I have been following this fic for some time and not commenting. My biggest
concern with the current flow of the story is that most of the events that
are spawning the criticism are happening within a period of less than 24
hours. There have been some interesting takes and complaints about the flow
of events. My thoughts on this (after the initial "Oh, my [expletive
deleted] God") are "Nodoka really didn't plan things out very well".
As far as the question of why the Emperor is not taking action until now, we
have been given few hints of the Emperor's original plans for Ranma (and I
got the impression that there were plans for Ranma). Again, Nodoka's actions
very likely were as unforseen as the outcome of the events at Mt. Horai.
Most of the actions in the chapters titled "Interregnum" seem to be as much
damage control as anything else. The near absence of the Senshi in this
segment seems to support this.
Concerning the reward of Ukyo vs. the harsh treatment of the Tendos, the
principals in both actions gave instructions based on what they knew from
(most likely) observers. As this knowledge is based on both the perceptions
of the ones who reported the facts, there is no guarantee that the reports
would be complete. Also, in the case of Ukyo, at the point in the manga
where the fic started, Ukyo was the least aggressive of the fiance's. In
general, when she did hit Ranma, it was more for embarrasing her, not
insulting her or being in a situation which angered her. The events of the
destruction of the Saotome house or the bombing of the wedding also did not
occur in this storyline. As far as the amount paid her as a settlement, it
is actually fairly small compared to some of the judgements that come out of
the American civil courtsystem these days (the only thing I have to judge
by, since I don't follow the Japanese civil courts).
<Now slinking back into the lurking shadows>
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