Ginrai wrote:

Well, after a *long* break, trying to get back into a C&C'ing groove.

Cool. Looking forward to it, as always.

Avenging
Act II
Chapter 1
Revenge of the Killer Hornet

Glad to see this is being continued.

Yeah, this chapter had been simmering around for a while and finally
demanded release.

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"...And so I said to her, 'Just bring your friend along to the hotel,

and

we'll make it a threesome.' And you know what she did?"

"No. What?"

"She kneed me in the groin."

Heh.  He should be glad she didn't try for anything worse.

It's the great equalizer, unless you've had your gonads removed, like 'Big
Man' Kincaid. :)

Twin brothers Ryo and Kyo Saeba stared at her in surprise. Kyo then

From what little I know of City Hunter, this sounds like Kaori's worst
nightmare come to life.

Heh. In many ways, yes.

"Out! Out now!" Kaori began throwing everything at her desk at them,

'everything on'

used the grammar comments for the most part.

the fact she couldn't just shoot them out of hand. As much as she

despised

superpowered beings, maybe having the ability to geld idiots wouldn't be

so

bad.

Is that going to play any major role in the future?

Her anger towards SPBs? Oh yeah. As I alluded to, her 'Uncle Peter' will
eventually pop up to help her as best he can. He just loves SPBs too.

She was still fantasizing about the duo squirming in discomfort as they

were

felt up in the bar when the men in question ran into her office, looking
more terrified than when they left. Each crouched behind Kaori's desk,

guns

But do they look more terrified than they did in her fantasy? ^_^

Heh. Probably not.

clones. The black business suits they wore cost more than he made in a

year.

The way they stared unblinkingly at him reminded him of the way his pet
snake would gaze at the mice that were put in the cage with him during
feeding time. He gulped nervously.

Now the question I want to know: Is Mousse, in his own endeavours to be a
lawer, being helped out by any of these people?

Since there are plenty of innocent people, he goes for them first before
giving the guilty their 'best defense'

interrogate, let alone arrest, for their felonious acts. You can be

assured

our clients will be suing for that as well. Now release them," the head
speaker demanded.

Something tells me that trying to press charges against Dr. Tofu would be
frowned upon by their superior.

But the Supreme Hydra doesn't know of the connection yet.

"I have an itch and it's right under the band, and I can't scratch it.

Ow!"

Mentello shouted as he was shocked again.

Can sympathize with that.

Yeah, I think most can. The two aren't really all that villainous, for the
most part. Mentello is obsessed from his high school trauma and the Fixer
just needed the money so Marie could have an... err, life.

"Marie!" the Fixer gasped out, coughing slightly on the remaining dust.

Yay!  She makes an appearance!

Yep. Having robots lying around is  standard for any technical genius.

"I can't do that," she said.

"Why?"

"He's a criminal," Marie said as though even a child would understand.

Hehehehe

Marie is actually a nice person. Only Hiroshi and a desire to help him more
than anything and trusting his judgment makes her do anything she otherwise
wouldn't.

'Fixer informed'

went with 'clarified' instead.

'protect him.'

Marie said, "I'm all right. May's been taking readings on me, as well as

He also created May or did he get her through mail order?

No. Built her from leftover parts after he was done with Marie. May doesn't
have an independent power supply, though. She runs on a cord or batteries.

helping me with regular maintenance. My radiation levels are well within
acceptable human tolerance. Also, none of the new neighbors have been
vomiting and losing their hair in the past few weeks, like the old ones

did.

I'd say the readings are accurate."

Mentello should about now be wondering why the Fixer hasn't been affected

by

the radiation.

He's a genius. He cooked up some gizmo Mentallo knows he wouldn't
understand.

"Good." Mentello began to scratch at his scalp, then gave a shout as he
shocked himself again.

Heh.

Now, just how will the lawers of Hydra explain this to the sergeant? ^_^

They have nothing to explain. They'll just leave. Marie did that on her own.

Looks good so far.  Hope to see more of it soon!

Depends on time. This was another day that passed with no writing done. :(

Thanks for the comments. They were really appreciated.

DB Sommer

Ginrai

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