Subject: [FFML] [C&C][Azumanga/R1/2] Avenging Side Story 2: Let the Games Begin
From: Michael A Chase
Date: 6/1/2004, 3:37 PM
To: DB Sommer
CC: ffml@anifics.com


Suggested changes: {before : after}

On 05/31/2004 06:11 PM, DB Sommer said:

Yukari stood in front of the class, motionless for several seconds.
Just when it seemed as though the class might make in the clear, she
blurted out, "Today's lesson is: all super heroes are jerks!" She
stopped talking there and scowled silently.

One must have skipped a date with her.

"Are you blind? It's the fourth dent from the right. The one next to
the grill."

Oh.  Now it is obvious.

The Grandmaster stared at her with eyes that would have made any
intelligent being tremble.

Tomo simply stared back.

That's the point, isn't it?

Osaka nodded satisfactorily. "Is {Xykploxys : xykploxys} a word? I
tried using that once, only Chiyo wouldn't let me."

The Grandmaster said, "To your already powerful form, I bestow upon
you super strength and stamina. Henceforth you shall be known as...
Amazonia."

Still running low on original SPB names?  Could be worse though, might
be Wizzer.

She shouted, "You made me so brilliant, my intellect is capable of 
dominating yours! You change all of us back to normal!"

The way things are going, she might have had a decent shot at that even
before he transformed her.

Isn't Brainiac a DC character?

The Grandmaster shook his head. "While I appreciate your desire to
keep them for their use in competitions, I'm afraid my needs
{supercede : supersede} yours."

"Neither can I, and I mean that literally," Chiyo said. "With my
newly increased intelligence, I calculate a less than .0008 percent
chance that she can defeat the Grandmaster."

"How can the odds be that low?" Kagura protested. "It's only a simple
game that even a child could win," {" :}

Chiyo shook her head sadly. "Yes, if it were a complicated game, like
checkers, her odds would be really bad."

Yup.

"Sounds to me like someone's afraid and trying to play mindgames with
his opponent. Well, the joke's on you, you old fart. I don't have a
mind to play games with," she stated proudly.

"Well, she's got that part right," Nyamo muttered.

Too easy, must resist another comment...

Sadly, Yomi's powers were identical to those of a hero known as 'Big 
Bertha', who was a member of the ill-fated Great Lakes Avengers (and
another reason why you never let Byrne {wrote : write} anymore than
you let Shatner direct.

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