God, I wish I knew what Murdock's angle was! :(

[Well... that would be telling

   I didn't expect an answer. :)

   This, I was not expecting.

[You didn’t think I’d forget about Ukyou did you?

   To be honest, it hadn't really occured to me.

"Well, that's easy," Akane laughed.

"Yes it is," Ranma laughed. "Sometimes TOO easy."

   Akane's sudden, awakening... was rather unexpected .

[Good or bad?
[And as shown by the clothing she’s not quite back to her old self.
[though it’s not that sudden.  It was brought upon by her feeding.

   Neither good nor bad, in and of itself, just as I said, unexpected. I think
it's good though because of it being unexpected.

   Normally, I hate Ranma as a girl fics, but this one I can't help but
like.

[maybe the problem is that they’re Ranma as a human girl ^_^

[Though here Ranma is a mother, not a girl.  It’s an important distinction for
Ranma’s mind.

   Agreed. Too many times in such fics Ranma ends up being a girly girl far too
easily, and cheaply IMO. In your fic however, you give a logical progression of
events, and still being himself, as much as he can, while being herself if you
catch my meaning.

--
Druid
moriryu@earthlink.net



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