Suggested changes: {before : after}
On 06/06/2004 01:55 AM, Steve T. said:
Note: Had a thought the other day, If I ever do a sequel, I was
thinking of having Ami cross paths with Dr. Peyton Westlake, aka:
Darkman. Of course, she'd have to fly to New York and we all know how
she feels about flying.
Since you've brought other characters to Tokyo, there's no particular
reason not to bring him over too.
Disclaimer: Sailor Moon is the creation of {Nako : Naoko} Takeuchi,
the concepts of Spiderman and such are by Stan Lee. No Money is being
made from this and no such intent should be {inferred : inffered}.
"Last night," Beryl said. "I told you that I would make you king of
the Tokyo {Underworld : underworld} if you helped us destroy the
Senshi. True, they got away, but the deal remains." He felt her join
him at the work bench. "Your majesty."
"Naru, what is it with you tying people down and using them as
dishware?" Usagi asked. "Some kind of kinky fetish? Hand me the red
bag, Ami.{: "}
"So?" Naru asked. "Aside from bringing to life one of Bacon's plays,
what's the point?"
I thought it was supposed to be Marlowe what wrote'm. :}b
Ami supposed it was for the best. It was that self-same concern for
details that left school authorities with no actual proof that Usagi
was responsible for the chaos she created. Without that proof, no
one wanted to risk her father's {wrath : ire} by kicking his daughter
out of school.
You used wrath in the scene with Beryl and Kenji.
"I need only give this to my father," Beryl said softly as she turned
the pages. "Usagi, with this alone, I could destroy you. But it's
not enough. For what you represent, it can never be enough. Even were
your death to last an eternity, it would not be enough." She smiled.
"But it will do." The book snapped closed and she replaced it in her
bag. "Three months, Usagi. Three months and then you pay for
Serenity's crimes . . . and your own."
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See 8. I'd think this would also apply to dealing appropriately with
opponents.